【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I look at this picture of myself， I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.

【答案】When I look at this picture of myself. I realize how time flies. I grown not only physically, also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was , I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days.
【解析】
⑴句意：当我看我这张照片是，我意识到时间过得是多么快。realize是及物动词，后直接跟宾语或从句，故去掉of。
⑵句意：在过去几年里我不仅身体上已经成长，而且精神上也得以成长。in the past few years是现在完成时的标志，故将had改为have。
⑶短语：not only……but also，故将and改为but。
⑷句意：在拍这张照片的第二年，我进入高中的第二年，成为学校音乐俱乐部的一名新成员。be+过去分词 构成被动语态，而took是过去式，故将took改为taken。
⑸and前后构成并列关系，既become与entered是并列的，故用一般过去式，因此把become改为became。
⑹句意：照片中在我周围的是那时候在我的生活中很重要的东西：汽车杂志和乐器。picture是可数名词，在前文中已经出现过，故加the表示特指。
⑺此处是定语从句，缺少关系代词，先行词是things，故将they改为that或which。
⑻句意：我喜欢研究不同的汽车、飞机，演奏流行音乐，收集最新的音乐唱片。修饰名词应该用形容词，故将difference改为different。
⑼late不可作定语，故将late改为latest，最新的。
⑽句意：这张照片经常给我带来对高中生活的回忆。根据句意可知此处描写我的生活，故将your改为my。