【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, Mum gave me two tickets for a film. Although she was too busy to go with me, she told me to sell the extra ticket if possibly. At the gate of the cinema I met a handsome young man who was offered to have them, but he had only an 100-yuan note. He asked me to wait a while for him change it in the cinema’s store. Without much thinking, I agreed. He walked so fast that I could hard keep up for him. Soon he disappeared. I stood there without knowing how to do. Suddenly I realized the handsome young fellow has cheated me. He had saved money, but lost his honor.
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【解析】本文主要讲了我准备卖掉额外的一张电影票,却被一个年轻人借口找零钱欺骗,他虽然省了钱,却丢失了尊严。
考查连词。句意:因为她太忙了,不能和我一起去。表示“因为……”,所以Although改为as/because。
考查固定用法。句意:她告诉我说如果可能的话,卖掉额外的票。If possible是固定用法,意思是如果可能的话。所以possibly改成possible。
考查语态。这里含有一个定语从句,关系词指代先行词a handsome young man,a handsome young man与offer之间是主动关系,所以用主动语态,删掉was。
考查代词。句意:一个年轻人想要买它。“它”指代前面的额外的那张电影票,所以them改为it。
考查冠词。100-yuan note的首字母发音是辅音,所以an改成a。
考查副词。表示目的“为了换零钱”,所以change之前加to。
考查副词。句意:他走的太快了,我几乎跟不上他。hard意思是困难的,而hardly意思是几乎不,所以hard改成hardly。
考查固定短语。句意:他走的太快了,我几乎跟不上他。Keep up with是固定短语,意思是赶得上。所以for改成with。
考查代词。句意:我站在那里,不知道做什么。What意思是什么,所以how改成what。
考查宾语从句的时态。这里含有一个宾语从句,主句用的是一般过去时,从句应该使用相应的过去时态,这里应该使用过去完成时,所以has改成had。