【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in the Grade One,I was terrible poor in English.Be sleepy in class was one of the reasons why I rarely did well in school.Once I even failed in a mid-term exam.While I got the papers,I realized that things would be better if I listened to the teacher attentively.My teacher told me,"Yesterday is history.Today is a gift.If you bury you into English now,you'll make it."I can't agree much.From then on,I began to study harder.Out of my expectation, I made great achievement soon.Today,English is which my strength lies.And I'm grateful for my English teacher.
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【解析】1. Grade +基数词表示几年级时，前面不用冠词，故删去a。
2. I was terrible poor in English.应用副词terribly修饰形容词poor，故把terrible改为terribly。
3. Be sleepy in class was one of the reasons有谓语动词was，所以用动名词作主语，故把Be改为Being。
4. While I got the papers, I realized that things would be better中 I got the papers是表示短暂性时间，不用while引导时间状语从句，故把while改为when。
5. 句意：我意识到如果我用心听老师讲课会更好。表示对过去事情的虚拟，从句用过去完成时，故I后加had。
6. bury oneself into专心致志地，故把you改为yourself。
7. I couldn't agree more.意为“不能同意更多”，即“非常同意”。故把much改为more。
8. achievement表示“成绩”是可数名词，成绩不止一项，故把achievement改为achievements。
9. English is which my strength lies. lie是不及物动词，表语从句中缺少地点状语，故把which改为where。
10. 固定搭配be grateful to sb. for sth.因某事而对某人感激，故把for改为to。