【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother has a pair of eye which can speak. Whatever I meet difficulties, her eyes will encourage me and cheer me up. When I began learning to walk, Mom always lend me a hand and encouraged me to stand up when I fell down. As I final threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled by praise. After I started the school, Mom’s eyes still encouraged myself. When I failed my English exam, Mom helped me find out the reasons instead punishing me. Now I have grown up and become independence. However, I can always see my mother’s encouraged eyes wherever I go.
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【解析】第一处:eye→eyes a pair of 后用eye的复数形式。
第二处:Whatever→Whenever / When 此处为时间状语从句,故用Whenever / When引导。
第三处:lend→lent 由前文的时态可知用一般现在时。故把lend→lent。
第四处:final→finally 修饰动词threw用副词修饰,故用finally。
第五处:by→with smiled with praise 为常见用法。故把by→with。
第六处:删除the started school 开始上学,故删除the。
第七处:myself→me 此处表示妈妈的眼睛仍然鼓励我,不必用反身代词。故把myself→me。
第八处:instead后加of instead 后加of再加动名词punishing,意为"而不是"。故在instead后加of。
第九处:independence→independent become要与形容词构成系表结构,故把 independence改为independent。
第十处:encouraged→encouraging encouraged感到鼓舞的,修饰人的感情;encouraging 令人鼓舞的,修饰物。此处修饰物,故把encouraged 改为encouraging。