【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mum and Dad
We're having a wonderful time in Australia. There is so much to see that it is impossible for me to tell you everything. During past three days, we've travelled a lot around Sydney. We went to the zoo, on where we saw many animals that can only be found in Australia. We spent some time relaxing in the sunshine at the beach, but we went to Pitt Street and wander around for a bit while we did some shopping. Though I would like to spend more time here, the locally guide told us that we will fly to Cairns tomorrow. It's said that word cannot describe the beauty of the ocean near Cairns. Now everybody is busy packed so that we will not lose time when we set off. This time tomorrow we will be enjoying the ocean near Cairns. I can't wait!
Because I have much more to tell you, I must go to bed now so that I can get up early and get to the airport on time. Please send my best wishes to Granny and tell she that I am coming back soon.
Love
Robert
在线课程【答案】
【解析】1.在during后加the.
考查冠词。句意：在过去的三天里，我们在悉尼周围旅行了很多地方。根据句意可知，是指在特指的三天里，要定冠词the.
2.去掉where前的on.
考查定语从句。句意：我们去了动物园，在那里我们看到了许多只能在澳大利亚发现的动物。分析句子We went to the zoo, on where we saw many animals可知，先行词the zoo 被定语从句修饰，把zoo放回从句中为：in the zoo we saw many animals。因此the zoo在定语从句中作地点状语，故用where，即We went to the zoo, on where we saw many animals中的on多余，故去掉where前的on.
3.but改为and.
考查连词。句意：我们在海边的阳光下放松了一下，我们还去了皮特街逛了逛。分析句意可知前后两句是并列关系，而非转折关系，故把but改为and。
4.wander改为wandered。
考查谓语动词的时态。分析句子we went to Pitt Street and wander around for a bit可知，本句中的went和wander是并列谓语，而本文讲述的是过去的事，故要用一般过去时。因此把wander改为wandered。
5.locally改为local。
考查形容词作定语。分析本句可知，guide为名词（向导），修饰名词的要用形容词，而locally 为副词，不能修饰名词，要用形容词local修饰名词，故把locally改为local。
6.will改为would。
考查时态。分析句子Though I would like to spend more time here, the locally guide told us that we will fly to Cairns tomorrow可知，主从句要保持时态的一致性，而向导告诉（told）我们，因此要用过去将来时，所以把will改为would。
7.word改为words。
考查名词复数。句意：据说语言无法描述凯恩斯市附近的海洋之美。本文中指无数用语言（即单词）来描述，但word是可数名词，而语言是由许多单词（words）构成，因此要用复数形式。因此把word改为words.
8.packed改为packing。
考查固定搭配。句意：现在每个人都忙着收拾行李。Be busy (in) doing，为固定搭配，“忙于做某事”，因此要把packed改为packing。
9.Because改为Though.
考查连词。句意：尽管我还有很多事要告诉你，但我现在必须上床睡觉..…。分析句子可知这两句是转折关系，而非因果关系，故要把.Because改为Though.
10.在tell后添加her
考查句意的通顺。句意：请把我最美好的祝愿带给奶奶，并告诉她（her）我很快就回来。分析句子可知是告诉奶奶，因此少了宾语her。