【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
It's my honor to share my dream university to you. I'm glad to tell you that my dream university is Peking University, that is one of the best university in the world.
There are several reasons how I'd like Peking University. At the first, it has first-class teaching staff and equipment, which will help me make progress quickly. Secondly, it is famous for their positive academic atmosphere where students study hardly to meet new challenges. And at last, my brother, who studies there, says he is very satisfying with the university.
It’s not easy enter Peking University, but I think my dream will come true if I worked hard.
Could you tell me something about your dream university?
Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲了作者的梦想是去北京大学读书。
第一处:考查固定用法。share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物,是固定用法,所以to改成with。
第二处:考查非限制性定语从句。which is one of the best university in the world.作定语,修饰Peking University,且有逗号隔开,所以which is one of the best university in the world.是一个非限制性定语从句,关系词在从句中作主语,指物,所以用which,that不能引导非限制性定语从句,that改成which。
第三处:考查固定结构。One of + 可数名词复数,……中之一,是固定结构,所以university改成universities。
第四处:考查固定句型。That's the reason why…这就是……的原因,是固定句型,所以how改成why。
第五处:考查固定短语。at first起先,首先,是固定短语,所以去掉the。
第六处:考查代词。它因为它积极的学术氛围而出名。表示“它的”,所以their改成its。
第七处:考查副词。在那里,学生们努力学习,迎接新的挑战。hard努力地,hardly几乎不,所以hardly改成hard。
第八处:考查固定用法。be satisfied with对…感到满意,是固定用法,所以satisfying改成satisfied。
第九处:考查不定式。It是形式主语,后面的不定式是真正的主语,所以easy后加to。
第十处:考查if引导的条件状语从句。if引导的条件状语从句,当主句是一般将来时,从句用一般现在时,所以worked 改成work。