【题目】假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student of Class 1, Grade 2. I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcer, so I’m writing to introduce me.
First of all, I am great interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hope that I can work as an announcer for the future. Now I would like to put that I have learned into a practice and gain some experience. Beside, I am good at English, especially spoken English. I win the first prize in the English Speech Competition last year. So I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station.
I am looking forward your early reply.
在线课程【答案】第二行:announcer改为announcers;
第三行me 改为myself;
第四行:great改为greatly;
第五行:hope改为hoping; for改为in;
第六行:that改为what; a 删掉;
第七行: beside改为besides; win改为won;
第十行:forward后加to.
【解析】本文作者想要成为学校广播站的英语播音员,并且详细介绍了自己的特长。
考查名词单复数。“两名英语播音员”是复数意义,所以第二行:announcer改为announcers。
考查反身代词。句意为所以我写信介绍我自己。表示“我自己”,所以第三行me 改为myself。
考查副词。修饰形容词interested,用副词,所以第四行:great改为greatly。
考查非谓语动词。hope与其逻辑主语I之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词,hope改为hoping。
考查固定短语。in the future是固定短语,所以for改为in。
考查宾语从句。what I have learned作put之后的宾语,是一个宾语从句,引导词在从句中作learned的宾语,故用what,所以that改为what。
考查固定短语。put into practice实行,实施;落实,是固定短语,所以a 删掉。
考查副词。此外,我擅长英语,特别是口语。表示“此外”,所以beside改为besides。
考查时态。由时间状语last year,可判断出是发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以win改为won。
考查固定短语。look forward to是固定短语,意思是期待、期盼,所以forward后加to。