【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or tough. As a Senior 3 student, I have a same dream as my classmates I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I had done everything I can to equip myself with what I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got father to my dream. Anxiety and pressure did discourage from me at time. Moreover, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think they will make it.
I’m sure that there is still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenging it is, I’ll make it come true. As a proverb saying, “Where there is a will, there’s a way.”
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【解析】achieve改为achieving
考查固定用法。on the way to doing为固定搭配，意为“即将做某事，在去……路上”。故achieve 要改为achieving。句意：每个人都有一个梦想。我们正在实现的路上。
2.a改为the
考查固定搭配。The same…as…为固定搭配，意为“和…一样…”。故a改为the。句意我有一个和我的同学一样的梦想，就是我可以考上一所理想的大学。
3.在I前添加that
考查从句连词。分析句子 “I have a same dream as my classmates I can be admitted to an ideal university.” 可知本句中的dream与后面的I can be admitted to an ideal university.是同位语关系，the dream就是后面的I can be admitted to an ideal university。分析句子可知，从句中不缺少成份，故引导名词从句，在句中不作任何成分的要用that.,我有一个和我的同学一样的梦想，我可以考上一所理想的大学