【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are want in your company. I am eager to be one of them. So I am writing a letter to you. My name is Wang Ping. I was born in Hebei Province and I am in good healthy. I do very well in all subject, especially English. I can read in English documents and speak English fluent as well. Besides, I know a little French, that may be helpful to the business. It is said that your company are very famous and well managed. I’ll appreciate if I can work with you.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Ping
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【解析】
这是一篇求职信。王平给公司写需要职员的公司写信自荐,这里介绍了王平的基本信息,应聘的优势等。
第一处:考查被动语态。这里some clerks与want之间是动宾关系,这里指的是需要职员,所以这里需用被动语态,故将want改为wanted。
第二处:考查冠词。这里特指的是写的这封信,所以需用冠词the,故将a改为the。
第三处:考查名词。副词不能放在句末,介词in后需用名词,故将healthy改为health。
第四处:考查名词复数。根据all可知,这里的subject需用复数形式,故将subject改为subjects。
第五处:考查动词。read为及物动词,所以后面可以直接接宾语,不需要用介词in,故将in去掉。
第六处:考查副词。这里需用副词来修饰动词speak,fluent为形容词,需改为副词fluently,故将fluent改为fluently。
第七处:考查非限制性定语从句。that不能引导非限制性定语从句,该句的先行词是 a little French,在句中作主语,所以需用关系代词which。
第八处:考查主谓一致。Company作为集体名词,当表示一个整体时谓语动词需用单数形式,所以需将are改为is。
第九处:考查代词。Appreciate为及物动词,其后需接宾语,所以这里需用代词it,故在appreciate后加it。
第十处:考查固定搭配。Look forward to doing sth期望做某事,为固定搭配,所以这里需用动词的ing形式,故将hear改为hearing。