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10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处

加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

1． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

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【6】【7】【8】【9】【10】

【答案】

【1】holding---hold

【2】passes----passed

【3】much--- well/clearly

【4】shoulder—shoulders

【5】toward---to/into

【6】himself---him

【7】he前加and

【8】去掉fact前的a

【9】during---when

【10】never---ever

【解析】第一处：句意：我几乎不记得我的祖母。她过去常常抱着我跪在地上，唱老歌。考查固定搭配，used to do sth意为“过去常常做某事”，故将holding改为hold。

第二处：句意：我只有四岁时，她去世了。外婆去世这件事发生在过去，所以应该用过去时，故将passes改为passed。

第三处：句意：我非常深的记得我的祖父。remember只能被well/clearly修饰，表达“记得很深/好”，故将much改为well。

第四处：句意：他个子很高，肩膀宽阔。根据常理，人有两个肩膀，肩膀应该是复数，所以应该用复数形式，故将shoulder改为shoulders。

第五处：句子a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.句意为“祖父有多年来从黑色变成了灰色的胡子”，由over the years以前主句中用的过去时可知，应该用过去完成时had done，故在此处加上had。

第六处：句意：他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。所以应该用宾格him。故将himself改为him。

第七处：根据句中结构可知He had a deep voice…和he was strong and powerful是并列关系，故用and连接。

第八处：固定短语in fact表示“实际上”，故删去a。

第九处：during为介词，后不能接句子；应用when这个连词引导时间状语从句。故将during改为when。

第十处：语义错误。句意：他是我认识的最温柔的人。故将never改为ever。