【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, as the development of high technology, smart phone is very popular to high school student. Smart phone once is forbidden. But now it has become a very common tool for students. A lot of students keep his eyes on smart phones all the time. Teachers are annoying about this situation, so they feel most students ignore them when they are giving lessons. Some teachers think it is time to let the students hand to hand in their smart phones.
I don’t think it is good idea. Even for the teachers, they used their phones so much, let alone the students. The teachers should improve their teaching methods to catch the students’ interest.
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【解析】本文讨论了学生应不应该使用智能手机的问题,所持观点各异。
第一处,as改为with。with the development of … 随着… 的发展。
第二处,to改为with/among。be popular with/among sb. 受到…的欢迎。
第三处,is改为was。once 曾经,一度,时间副词,表过去,因此用一般过去时。
第四处,tools改为tool。其前有a修饰,应为单数。
第五处,his改为their。属于单复数搭配错。主语为students,用their代指“他们的”。
第六处,annoying改为annoyed。过去分词作表语修饰人,“感到恼怒的”。
第七处,so改为because/as。前后分句之间的关系为“前果后因”,老师感到恼怒的原因是上课的时候学生不能够好好听讲。
第八处,去掉to。固定结构let sb. do sth. 用不带to的不定式,即动词原形作宾补。
第九处,在it is和good idea之间加a。属冠词用错。a good idea一个好主意。
第十处,used改为use。时态用错。此处叙述现在的状况,应该为一般现在时态。