文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

I've learned a teaching assistant for foreign teachers is wanted in your school. I'm writing to apply to the position.

First of all, I had graduated from Anhui University one month ago. Having exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate with others in fluently English, What's more, years of experiences of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, who will help a lot to keep the class in order. The most important factor is that I love kids, and I'm confident of my patience and care will undoubtedly, win his trust.

All in all, I think my enthusiasm and full sense of responsibility will make me a qualifying teaching assistant. I'd appreciate you if you could take my application into consideration.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hun

【答案】

【解析】1、句意为我想要应聘这个职位。apply for 为固定搭配，表示申请。故将to改为for。

2、句意为我一个月前从大学毕业。这里考查的是时态问题。从a month ago 可知，毕业应该是过去时，应该用一般过去时。故将had去掉。

3、句意为从小的时候开始我就接触了外国老师。考察explose用法，暴露与作者之间应该是被动语态。故在having后面添加been。

4、句意为我能和他人用流利的英语交流。fluently为副词，不能修饰名词。故将fluently改为fluent。

5、句意为当班长的多年经历让我成为一个很好的组织者。experience没有复数形式。故将experiences改为experience。

6、句意为这会对保持班级秩序有很大帮助。该句为非限制性定语从句，而且此处的关系代词应该是指的是作者是一个很好的组织者，为一件事，不能用who。故将who 改为which。

7、句意为我的耐心和关怀会毫无疑问的赢得他们的信任，对此我很有信心。be confident of 后面加名词。be confident that 引导从句。故将of改为that。

8、由文意可知，作者是想当助教。因此赢得的信任应该是一群学生，而不是一个人。故将his改为their。

9、句意为我认为我的热情和责任感，会让我成为一名合格的助教。考查形容词。qualified为符合资格的。故将qualifying改为qualified。

10、句意为如果你将我的申请列入考虑范围内的话，我将非常感谢。考察appreciate用法。would appreciate it ...为固定搭配表示感谢。故将you改为it。