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10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处

加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

1． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

【答案】

【1】holding—hold

【2】passes---passed

【3】much----well/clearly

【4】shoulder---shoulders

【5】toward---to

【6】himself---him

【7】he前加and

【8】去掉a

【9】during---when

【10】never---ever

【解析】

【1】holding—hold 考查动词短语。Used to do 过去常常，故用动词原形；

【2】passes---passed 考查动词的时态。根据前面的I was only four可知，用一般过去时

【3】much----well/clearly 考查副词。根据句意可知，我很清楚地记得我的爷爷。此处very much是多的意思，不合题意

【4】shoulder---shoulders 考查名词的复数。根据常理“人有两个肩膀”。所以，用复数形式

【5】toward---to 考查介词。根据句意可知，这里指：黑胡子变成了白胡子。所以，用turn to或into的形式；

【6】himself---him 考查介词。根据句意：他有着深沉的嗓音，这让他有别于我们小镇上的其他人。根据句意可知用him

【7】he前加and 考查连词。根据句中结构可知He had a deep voice, （which set him apart from others in our small town,）和he was strong and powerful.是并列关系。所以，用and连接起来

【8】去掉a 考查固定短语。根据固定短语in fact可知，去掉a

【9】during---when 考查连词。根据they came over to play or do homework with me.是句子，所以，用连词when，during是介词，不能连接状语从句