【题目】假如你是李华,你校将于下周五晚八点在体育馆举行一场中国功夫(Chinese Kungfu)的表演。你想邀请外教Michael一起观看演出。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 演出时间、地点;
2. 简单介绍中国功夫。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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在线课程【答案】Dear Michael,
A Chinese Kungfu performance is going to be staged in our school stadium at 8:00 p. m. next Friday evening. Learning that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you.
Chinese Kungfu, a traditional sport, has a long history and is regarded as our national treasure. It is a means of self-defense and it can also enhances people’s physical fitness. So far, Chinese Kungfu has attracted numerous fans both at home and abroad. Several Kungfu masters will be invited to perform, which is sure to make it splendid.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邀请信,邀请外教Michael一起观看中国功夫的演出。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第二、三人称
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总—分—总法
要点:
1. 演出时间、地点;
2. 简单介绍中国功夫。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
Chinese Kungfu;be going to;school stadium;be interested in;Chinese culture;a long history;be regarded as;self-defense;so far;at home and abroad;be sure to;look forward to等
第三步:连词成句
1. A Chinese Kungfu performance is going to be staged in our school stadium at 8:00 p. m. next Friday evening.
2. Learning that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you.
3. Chinese Kungfu, a traditional sport, has a long history and is regarded as our national treasure.
4. It is a means of self-defense and it can also enhances people’s physical fitness.
5. Chinese Kungfu has attracted numerous fans both at home and abroad.
6. Several Kungfu masters will be invited to perform, which is sure to make it splendid.
7. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
and;both…and…;as等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改