【题目】假定你是李华,你的好友Jack是来自英国的一位交换生,即将在你市某中学学习半年时间。他想了解并学习中国画,最近来信希望你给他推荐一位美术老师。请根据下面的要点提示,给对方写一封回信。内容包括:
1.简介中国画;
2.帮助联系指导老师。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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在线课程【答案】Dear Jack,
It's amazing to know you are coming to my town as an exchange student and that you plan to learn Chinese painting. Traditional Chinese painting is known as 'guohua', which covers a variety of subjects, such as flowers, birds, insects, etc. The painting is done using a brush dipped in black or colored ink. As for the art teacher you want me to recommend, I think my art teacher is the right person. When I told him about your desire, he was glad to instruct you. And I can spare some time to accompany you when you are having lessons from him.
Hope my advice can be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给好友Jack写信,给他推荐一位中国画美术老师。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1.简介中国画;
2.帮助联系指导老师。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
introduce sth. to sb./ tell sb. sth./ have a long history/ plan to do sth./ be glad to do sth./ be familiar with/ hope to do sth.
第三步:连词成句
1. I am glad to know you are coming to my town as an exchange student and that you plan to learn Chinese painting.
2. Known as 'guohua', traditional Chinese painting covers a variety of subjects, such as flowers, birds, insects, etc., and has a long history in China.
3. Using a brush dipped in black or colored ink the painting will be done, which sounds very easy.
4. Actually, it is a little more difficult than thought.
5. As for the art teacher you want me to recommend, I think my art teacher is the right person.
6. When I told him about your desire, he was willing to instruct you.
7. Besides, I can spare some time to accompany you when you are having lessons.
8. Additionally, we can also exchange our ideas.
9. Hoping my advice can be helpful to you.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)