【题目】假如你是晨光中学的李津,为配合学校的科技月活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文,介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿,文章内容包括:
1. 简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人。
2. 谈谈这款生活智能机器人的功能(至少写2点)
3. 说明生活型机器人的意义。
注意:1. 词数不要少于100。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:智能机器人intelligent robot
June 10, 2020
Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
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在线课程【答案】June 10, 2020
Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.
In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.
So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which, people can be freed from heavy labour. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example.
There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life more convenient and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生写一篇英语短文,介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人的相关信息。
第一步:审题
体裁:说明文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:三段式结构。第一段提出话题“一款生活型智能机器人”;第二段讲述其功能特点;第三段说明其意义。
要求:1.提出话题(an intelligent robot)
2.介绍相关情况:功能强大(so many powerful functions)
1)做家务(do all the housework)
2)照顾幼小(take good care of the elderly and the sick)
3) 网络娱乐(surf the Internet;entertain)
3. 意义阐述
1)体现科技发展(show the rapid development of science and technology of our country)
2)生活助手(will be a big helper)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
environmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in various ways; do the housework; such as; be capable of; take good care of; take advantage of; communicate with; not only…but (also); surf the Internet; not to mention; there’s no doubt that; be convinced; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.
2. So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways.
3. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which, people can be freed from heavy labour.
4. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them.
5. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information.
6. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example.
7. There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country.
8. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life more convenient and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:first of all; firstly/first; secondly/second…; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2.表并列补充关系:what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not only…but (also); including
3.表因果关系:because; as; so; thus; therefore; as a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改