【题目】为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召,学校学生会开展了以“绿色城市,健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“Green City, the Healthy Lift”为题,根据所给提示, 用英语写一篇短文。
主题 | 绿色城市,健康生活 |
做法 | 绿色出行,减少空气污染;垃圾处理,保持城市整洁:多种树木,保护自然环境…… |
观点 |
注意:
1.词数100左右,短文开头己给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Green City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Huludao City, it’s our duty to _______________________________________
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在线课程【答案】The Green City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Huludao City, it’s our duty to help protect our city’s environment and make it a greener place to live in. Here are some small things we all can do and should do:
First of all, we can ride bicycles to and from school as much as possible to reduce air pollution. Secondly, wherever we go, we should throw rubbish into rubbish bins to keep our city clean and tidy. Last but not least, we should plant more trees to protect our city’s natural environment.
In my opinion, a green city is the key to a healthy life. If everyone makes a contribution to building a green city, Huludao will become a more beautiful place. Let’s take action now!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召,学校学生会开展了以“绿色城市,健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“Green City, the Healthy Lift”为题,根据所给提示, 用英语写一篇短文。要点包括:(1)主题:绿色城市,健康生活;(2)做法:绿色出行,减少空气污染;垃圾处理,保持城市整洁:多种树木, 保护自然环境……;(3)你的观点。人称使用第一、三人称。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:protect our city’s environment;a greener place to live in;ride bicycles to and from school;as much as possible;keep our city clean and tidy;make a contribution to;take action等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。