【题目】假定你是李华，正计划去英国留学，请给英国一所大学的招生办的相关人员写一封信，咨询如何写自荐信。内容包括：
1.介绍你的留学计划（时间、专业等）。
2.请教如何写自荐信（内容、注意事项等）
注意：1.词数80左右。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇；self-recommendation letter自荐信
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best Wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a high school student from China. I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to do me a favor.
I'm planning to study in the UK after graduation in September for two years. I'm a science student and I'd like to major in science, such as computer science or engineering. Could you tell me how to write a self-recommendation letter? I am wondering what aspects should be included in it. What's more, are there any problems to which I need to pay special attention ?
Thank you for your kindness. I would appreciate it if you could give me an immediate reply .
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封咨询信。
第一步：
审题：咨询信 咨询如何写自荐信
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分自我介绍，说明写信目的；第二部分介绍你的留学计划，请教如何写自荐信；第三部分感谢帮助，希望尽快得到回复。
要点：
1. 自我介绍，说明写信目的：请求帮助
2．介绍你的留学计划，请教如何写自荐信
①介绍你的留学计划：计划9月毕业后去英国学习两年，想学习科学方面的专业，如计算机科学或工程学
②请教如何写自荐信：自荐信应该包括哪些方面，有什么需要特别注意的事项
3．感谢帮助，希望尽快得到回复
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
a high school student；do sb.a favor；plan to do…；after graduation；major in；a self-recommendation letter；aspect；include；pay attention to；give an immediate reply
第三步：连词成句
(1) I'm Li Hua.
(2) I’m a high school student from China.
(3) I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to do me a favor.
(4) I'm planning to study in the UK after graduation in September for two years.
(5) I'd like to major in science.
(6) I would like to learn computer science or engineering.
(7) Could you tell me how to write a self-recommendation letter?
(8) I am wondering what aspects should be included in it.
(9) Are there any problems?
(10) I need to pay special attention to the problems.
(11) I would appreciate it if you could give me an immediate reply .
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
将第2个句子作同位语，连接下面的两个句子
(1) I'm Li Hua.
(2) I’m a high school student from China.
→I'm Li Hua, a high school student from China.
用such as表示列举，连接下面两个句子
(5) I'd like to major in science.
(6) I would like to learn computer science or engineering.
→I'd like to major in science, such as computer science or engineering.
将第2个句子改写成定语从句,连接下面的两个句子
(9) Are there any problems?
(10) I need to pay special attention to the problems.
→Are there any problems which I need to pay special attention to ?
→Are there any problems to which I need to pay special attention ?
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。