增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

On the 70th anniversary of our motherland, my classmates and I shoot a video to celebrate it. The video was consisted of solo performances. I was one of the solo singer, and I had practiced hard for it. Two girls designed the dance to enrich the video. Beside, our English teacher joined us, provided us with lots of help. The video’s success was true a team effort. Everyone taking part learned a great deal from it and determined work harder. Our country’s rapid development makes it possible of us to grow up with good living conditions. We will take on the responsibilities of contributing to your country.

【答案】

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。讲述的是作者和同学为祖国70华诞制作短片的故事。

1．考查动词。shoot在句子中是谓语，根据时间状语可知用一般过去时。故将shoot改为shot。

2．考查动词。consist of 是不及物动词，没有被动。故去掉was。

3．考查名词的数。one of 后接名词复数，故将singer改为singers。

4．考查冠词。此处dance为泛指。故将the改为a。

5．考查副词。beside意为在…旁边，此处应为除…以外，故将beside改为besides。

6．考查非谓语动词。provide 与逻辑主语English teacher之间为主动关系，应该用现在分词。故将provided改为providing。

7．考查副词。此句不是be 后面用形容词，而是表示真地，副词。故将true改为truly。

8．考查固定搭配。determine to do sth。故在work 前面加to。

9．考查介词。adj+for\of+sb+to do，用of 时adj 是修饰人的，故将of改为for。

10．考查代词。句意应该是我们为我们的国家做贡献。故将your改为our。