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假设你是红星中学学生李华.你和同学在寒假期间去医院参加了志愿者活动.请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序.给校刊英语角写一篇英文稿件.介绍此次经历.注意:词数不少于60.提示词:自助挂号机 self-servi

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【题目】假设你是红星中学学生李华。你和同学在寒假期间去医院参加了志愿者活动,请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,给校刊英语角写一篇英文稿件,介绍此次经历。

注意:词数不少于60。

提示词:自助挂号机 self-service registration machine

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【答案】Last winter vacation, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital.

On our first morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, informing us of our roles as volunteers. It was the first time for me to know the daily routines in a hospital.

The next morning, fully prepared, we went to different posts and started our job. Together with my classmates, I assisted some patients when they didn’t know how to use the self-service registration machine. For senior citizens, we helped them register to save them the trouble.

Besides, I showed people the way to different consulting rooms. For those elderly patients, we accompanied them all the way until it was their appointment time. They really appreciated our help.

Later I shared my picture in the hospital on WeChat Moments. In no time, I received lots of likes from my friends. Some even expressed their great interest in the voluntary work. Actually, I had the most amazing experience doing very simple things for others.

【解析】

这是一篇图画类写作。

第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一篇记叙文;假设你是红星中学学生李华。你和同学在寒假期间去医院参加了志愿者活动,请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,给校刊英语角写一篇英文稿件,介绍此次经历。

第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:the daily routines(日常工作),the self-service registration machine(自助挂号机),save them the trouble(避免了麻烦),consulting rooms(咨询室)等。

第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。