【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周爷爷过生日,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇周记。记述你自制相册作为礼物并送出的过程。
注意:词数不少于60。

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在线课程【答案】Last Monday, while checking the calendar, I realized my grandpa’s birthday was approaching. What would be a good surprise gift for him this year?
While I was racking my brain for an idea, memories of the time I spent with Grandpa fishing and playing football or chess all flooded back. It suddenly hit me that I could make a photo album to record those precious moments. Without any delay, I threw myself into the creation of the album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos and designed each page. Finally, an album of love was born. Looking at each photo, I couldn’t help imagining how delighted Grandpa would be.
At the birthday party, when I presented the album to Grandpa, he hugged me affectionately, tears welling up in his eyes. My parents smiled happily.
The album serves not only as a gift to show my respect and appreciation to my dear Grandpa on this special day, but reminds me that I should spend more time with him.
Last Monday, while checking the calendar, I realized my grandpa’s birthday was around the corner. What would be a good surprise gift for him this year?
While I was racking my brain for an idea, memories of the time I spent with Grandpa fishing and playing football or chess all sprang up. It occurred to me that I could make a photo album to record those precious moments.
Without any delay, I threw myself into the creation of the album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos and designed each page. Finally, a hand-made album full of love insert was born. Looking at each photo, I couldn’t help imagining how delighted Grandpa would be.
At the birthday party, when I presented the album to Grandpa, he hugged me affectionately, tears welling up in his eyes. My parents smiled happily. The album serves not only as a gift to show my respect and appreciation to my dear Grandpa on this special day, but reminds me that I should spend more time with him. Just as the proverb goes, family affection does matter a lot.
【解析】
考查漫画类作文写作。
题目要求假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周爷爷过生日,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇周记。记述你自制相册作为礼物并送出的过程。分析可知,应该以第一人称为主,一般过去时进行写作。根据图画总结要点,要求考生自己发挥拓展,不要背离图画意思,考生要先想好写哪几点,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。