【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Knowing from your website that a competition for freely tickets to the Mulan musical is being held, I am writing apply for one. The following can well explain why I should deserve I. She was told about the story of Mulan by my grandpa when I am only three years old. Since then I have been crazy about the brave or dutiful girl. I’ve collected and read over 20 different book version of Mulan, seen all the Mulan movies and attend play performances twice. I’ve read if it’s an unbelievable show with wonderful songs, amazing costumes and remarkable sets. So you can imagine how exciting I am to hear the musical is coming to town. Thanks for organizing the competition and I hope I’ll be one of the lucky winners. If I am, the ticket can be sent it to 91 Remin Road.
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【解析】文中作者叙述了对花木兰的喜欢，写信申请网站的木兰音乐会免费票。
1.freely→free.考查形容词。修饰名词tickets用形容词，此处指免费的票，故freely →free.
2.writing后加to.考查动词不定式。此处是不定式表目的，指写信的目的是申请一张票。故writing后加to.
3.She→I.考查代词。此处指代作者自己小时候就知道花木兰的故事，故She→I.
4.am→was.考查动词时态。此处指作者三岁时，发生在过去用一般过去时，故am→was.
5. or→ and.考查连词。此处指花木兰是一个勇敢尽职的女孩，两个形容词是并列关系，用and连接，故or→ and.
6. version→ versions.考查名词。version是可数名词，由20 different修饰用复数，指20个不同版本。故version→ versions.
7. attend→ attended.考查动词时态。此处是现在完成时，和and前的collected和seen并列用过去分词。故attend→ attended.
8. if →that.考查连词。句中宾语从句是陈述句，不是疑问句，用that引导。故if →that.
9. exciting →excited.考查形容词。exciting “令人兴奋的”用来修饰物，excited “兴奋的” 用来修饰人。此处修饰I用excited.故exciting →excited.
10.去掉it.考查代词。此处是被动语态，指票被送到91 Remin Road.it重复，故去掉it.