【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(
)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there. The sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a little disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from a nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team won game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and went home. We really had fun.
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【解析】1.句意:天气温暖、阳光明媚,所以我们决定去游泳。根据前面的was可知句子用一般过去时态,故把decide---decided。
2.句意:当我到达海滩,朋友已经在那里。此处reach到达,是及物动词,后面直接跟到达的地点,故把the去掉。
3.句意:显现出同镜子一样光滑。此处appear显现出,是连系动词,后面用形容词做表语,故把smoothly---smooth。
4.句意:我感到高兴,而我的朋友感到有点失望。前后是转折关系,故把and---but。
5.句意:而我的朋友感到有点失望。故把disappointing--- disappointed。
6.some一些,修饰可数名词复数,故把hotdog--- hotdogs。
7.句意:使所有人都感到惊讶的是我们的队赢了比赛。主语从句做主语,从句缺少引导词和主语,what有双重作用,故把It---What。
8. 句意:使所有人都感到惊讶的是我们的队赢了比赛。此处表示特指,故在game前加the。
9.句意:我们放松了一会儿,睡在海滩上。此处是现在分词做伴随状态,故把sleep---sleeping。
10.句意:我们收起我们的东西回家。根据句意可知把my---our。