【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Thanks for your letter. You are describing a common problem experiencing by students all over China. What you already know, the competition to get into a good university or college is very fierce, and that by turn means a heavy study load for students. I know that this can feel like terrible burden at times. But my advices to you is to keep on studying as your hard work will pay for in the end.
In the meanwhile, do you best to relax. Proper rest and relaxation are extreme important. Although I know that you are very busy, but yet I want you to try to set some time aside after class and at the weekends such that you can unwind properly.
在线课程【答案】1. experiencingexperienced
2. WhatAs
3. byin
4. like∧terrible: a
5. advicesadvice
6. foroff
7. youyour
8. extremeextremely
9. but
10. suchso
【解析】1. experiencingexperienced 过去分词作后置定语，experience跟problem之间是被动关系，指学生经历的问题。
2. What-As As you already know, 非限制性定语从句，“正如你所知”。
3. byin in turn 为固定搭配，意为：转而，反过来。
4. like∧terrible: a 考查冠词，此处burden为可数名词，a terrible burden一个可怕的负担。
5. advicesadvice 考查不可数名词。advice为不可数名词。
6. foroff 考查固定搭配。pay for偿还…，为…付出代价； pay off 还清，得到回报。你的艰苦努力最终会得到回报。
7. youyour 考查物主代词。 do your best尽你最大努力。
8. extremeextremely extremely 修饰形容词important.
9.去掉 but although引导让步状语从句，主句前不可以再用并列连词but，去掉。
10. suchso so that引导结果状语从句。我想让你们在课后留一些时间，在周末这样你们就可以好好放松一下。
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