【题目】假如你是李华,你校即将迎来建校70周年的庆祝活动。请给你校摄影社的社长发一封电子邮件,邀请他们拍摄一个短片,为校庆献礼。内容包括:
1. 拍摄短片的目的;2. 短片的内容;3. 拍摄的时间和地点。
参考词汇:拍摄shoot
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 信的开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Jonny,
Our school will have the 70th anniversary celebration of its founding._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Jonny,
Our school will have the 70th anniversary celebration of its founding. Hearing the news, I am so excited that I can’t wait to invite you to shoot a video with me in celebration of this significant day.
In the video, we are expected to recall what we have experienced here and how we feel about our school. What’s more, some students will be invited to express their best wishes and blessing in both Chinese and English, wishing our school a brighter future. I plan to shoot the video from 8 am to 10 am next Friday at the cherry garden. If it is convenient for you, please arrive on time.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件:假如你是李华,你校即将迎来建校70周年的庆祝活动。请给你校摄影社的社长发一封电子邮件,邀请他们拍摄一个短片,为校庆献礼。内容包括:1. 拍摄短片的目的;2. 短片的内容;3. 拍摄的时间和地点。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:have the 70th anniversary celebration of its founding(有庆祝成立70周年的活动);can’t wait to invite you to shoot a video with me in celebration of this significant day(等不及邀请你和我一起拍一段视频来庆祝这个重要的日子);to express their best wishes and blessing(表达自己最美好的祝愿和祝福);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
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