【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many memories faded away. However, never I forget the sports meeting on a hot Friday morning, that has encouraged me a lot in my life afterwards. Having prepared
for a long time, all of the classmates were sure that I would win the basketball match undoubtedly. Far beyond our expectation, our captain had his arm been hurt when the match is approaching. How terribly it was! Though all of us tried to make up for the disadvantage, we lost a match by one score. We burst into tears at that moment. Saw this, our head teacher comforted us, “Nothing is more important than your friendship and your sense of teamworks. Success still belong to you.”
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【解析】本文主要是作者加快上学时的一场篮球赛,说明团队的重要性。
1.never后添加will.
本句考察的是部分倒装。否定词置于句首,句子要部分倒装,从句意可知是我永远也不会忘记在一个炎热的星期五早晨的运动会。所以要用一般将来时,此处少了will 。故在never后添加will.
2.that改为which,或加and.
考查引导非限制性定语从句的关系词,只能用which,不能用that ,故that改为which。也可以把非限制性定语从句改为由and连接的并列句,that指代前面的事。
3、I改为we
考查代词。句意:所有同学都确定我们能赢得篮球赛。根据句意是是我们能赢。而不是我一个人。故 I改为we.
4、. been去掉 。have sth. done.表示某物遭受。因此had his arm hurt,我们队长的手臂受伤了。故要把been去掉。
5.is 改为was。
考查谓语动词的时态。本文主要讲述过去的事,故要用一般过去时。所以 is 改为was。
6. terribly改为terrible
考查形容词作表语。这是多么的糟糕呀。Terrible 作表语,故要把terribly改为terrible 。
7.a 改为the
考查冠词。句意:我们因为一分而输了这场比赛。从句意可知是特指这场比赛,故要用the,特指这场比赛,不能用a 。故.a 改为the。
8.saw 改为seeing
考查非谓语作状语。See 的逻辑主语是our head teacher 与see是主动关系,故要用非谓语seeing作状语,因此这儿不能用动词的过去。因此saw 改为seeing
9.teamworks 改为teamwork
考查名词。Teamwork团队合作,是个不可数名词,故不能加s ,因此teamworks 改为teamwork 。
10.belong 改为belongs.
考查不可数名词。Success成功为抽象名词,故谓语动词要用单数形式,故belong 改为belongs