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【答案】Dear editor,

Now，more and more students are getting fond of western fast food，and thus they take in too much sugar and fat．【高分句型一】I don't think it good for their health．（学生的饮食现状）

There are all kinds of foods in the world．Which one is healthier，the Chinese food or the western fast food？Different people have different choices．But as people are busier and busier with their work，more and more people choose to eat the western fast food because it is convinient to get it，though they may think that the Chinese food is healthier．【高分句型二】（对中餐和西式快餐哪种更健康有不同看法）

In my opinion，the Chinese food is healthier．Firstly，the Chinese food contains a lot of fruit and green vegetables．It is rich in fiber and low in sugar and fat．Secondly，the Chinese food is very delicious and has many dishes．It is nice to taste．I think it is the healthiest in the world．So many Chinese people can keep fit and have white teeth．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇应用文。要求给报社写信。这篇作文要反映的是你对当今学生饮食的看法，应该用现在时态。文章宜分为三部分：第一部分，表明写信的目的。第二部分，介绍题目中要求的要点。尤其注意第三点要写明自己认为中式快餐更健康的原因。 第三部分，书信的末尾写上适当的结束语，可以表示祝愿，也可以表示期望等。

【亮点分析】1. 所给范文对要点介绍的非常清楚明确。第一段第一句点明了现在中学生的饮食现象。第二段中“Different people have different choices”表明第二个要点。第三段中用“In my opinion”点明第三个要点。2. 适当运用连接词，使文章条理明确，上下文逻辑关系明确。例如第二段中的but，because，第三段中的firstly，secondly，so等。 3. 长短句交叉使用，疑问句，陈述句应用自然。