【题目】假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录上周六你在公园劝阻游人钓鱼的经历。
提示词：公园管理处 the Park Service
注意：
1. 词数100左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
It was a bright sunny day last Saturday. After getting up, I ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
在线课程【答案】It was a bright sunny day last Saturday. After getting up, I started to jog in the park near my home. I was so happy breathing the fresh air in the warm sunshine. When I came near the lake, I saw a kid fishing with his dad.
At first I didn’t notice the sign saying “No Fishing” because it’s too small to spot. But having known that fishing is forbidden here, I went up to stop them. They hadn’t seen the sign either until I showed them. The dad felt so sorry about what they had done and packed up all the gears immediately. Then we waved goodbye to each other.
When I was about to continue my jogging, a worry struck me. What if other people didn’t notice the small sign? I went to the Park Service to suggest making the sign larger and more obvious. The officer was so glad to take my advice and I felt very excited.
What a good Saturday!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作——图画作文，要求写一篇周记。
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇周记；假设你是Li Hua，上周六你在公园跑步的时候，发现在禁止钓鱼的地方还有人钓鱼，你上前阻止他们，并向公园管理处提出加大禁止钓鱼牌子的建议。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：No fishing（禁止钓鱼），sign（标志），…too small to spot（太小了看不见），not… until…（直到）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）连词成句，需注意这是一篇周记，讲述的是上周末的事情，因此时态用一般过去时。同时，这是一篇图片式作文，一定要按照图片顺序进行写作，切记不可调乱顺序。
第4步：连句成文，可使用连词对文章进行润色，注意不要全用简单句，适当使用复合句，如They felt sorry about what they had done.等，全篇书写要清晰、规范、不得有涂改、书写错误等。
本文内容完整，语言规范，要点顺序正确，词数适当。时态、句型使用正确，是一篇比较优秀的应试作文。