【题目】假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday was my best friend Li Ming’s birthday. When school was over, I went to be bookshop to buy a book calling Exploring Space, and had them wrapped for him. Because he has wanted to buy this book for weeks, so I knew he would be very pleased with my present. When I got to the party, I gave the present to him and whispered soft, “You will love it.” He could not wait to opening it. All of sudden, the smile on his face disappeared. I saw some big red words in the cover of the book what said, Caring for Your Baby! I had picked up the wrong books in the shop!
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【解析】本文是一篇记叙短文。讲述了作者参加朋友李明的生日派对送错礼物的故事。
1.“I went to be bookshop to buy a book calling Exploring Space” 句子主语为book，书与call叫作之间是被动关系。故将calling改为called。
2.“and had them wrapped for him”由前文可知只有一本书，因此是第三人称单数的宾格，故将them改为it。
3.“Because he has wanted to buy this book for weeks” 根据前文可知此句为过去完成时态，前后时态应保持一致。故将has改为had。
4.“so I knew he would be very pleased with my present.”前半句中已经出现了because，在同一句中不能再用so表结果，故将so删掉。
5.“I gave the present to him and whispered soft” whispered为动词，因此应使用副词修饰动词。故将soft改为softly。
6.“He could not wait to opening it.” could not wait to do sth. ，动词不定式，表示迫不及待要做某事。故将opening改为open。
7.“All of sudden, the smile on his face disappeared.” 句中all of a sudden，表示突然。故添加a。
8.“I saw some big red words in the cover of the book what said” on介词，后面加名词，表示在某物的表面。the cover of the book书的封面，故将in改为on。
9.“I saw some big red words in the cover of the book what said”结合前句可知先行词为“some big red words”，中间没有逗号，因此使用限制性定语从句。故将what改为that/which。
10.“I had picked up the wrong books in the shop!”根据前文可知只有一本书，因此使用单数形式，故将books改为book。