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假设你是李华.5月1日你和同学参观了北京大学.请根据下图.用英语写一篇日记.注意:1. 词数100左右,2. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯,3. 开头已给出.不计入总词数.It's a f

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【题目】假设你是李华,5月1日你和同学参观了北京大学。请根据下图,用英语写一篇日记。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。

It's a fine day today and

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【答案】May 1 Monday Fine

It's a fine day today and we paid a visit to Beijing University. Early in the morning, we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome. We were then shown around.

We first went to the library with a large collection of books, where we saw students reading attentively. Next students sitting under trees, studying, which made a beautiful picture. At about 4 in the afternoon. We attended a lecture on science given by a famous professor. Before we knew it, it was time to say goodbye.

Now sitting at the table I feel very excited. I will make every effort to go to college.

【解析】试题分析:本次作文要求请根据下图,用英语写一篇日记,这种题型较难。首先要仔细观察图片内容,确定写作内容;其次要写出每个图的要点,再对内容加以充实;最后要审视全文,把握好文章主题,结尾点题。写作时注意准确运用时态(本文是日记,多用一般过去时态),上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写,认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了定语从句where we saw students reading attentively和which made a beautiful picture等;还有词组paid a visit to和make every effort都用得十分恰当。

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