【题目】假如你是红星中学学生李华。在今年的三月八日（国际劳动妇女节），你以自己的劳动付出送给了妈妈一份惊喜。请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序，以A Surprise to My Mom为题，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：菜谱recipe
A Surprise to My Mom
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在线课程【答案】It was March 8th, the Women’s Day. I decided to do something for my mom and give her a surprise.
Immediately after school, I went to the supermarket, where I bought plenty of vegetables, fish and meat. As soon as I arrived home, I started to prepare the dinner for Mom. It was the first time that I had cooked something on my own. Not knowing the exact procedures to cook, I read some recipes first. Keeping what I had learned in mind, I got down to cooking. Almost an hour later, three simple but delicious dishes were ready on the table.
Since Mom couldn’t get home until thirty minutes later, I started to do some cleaning. It was not difficult for me. Soon, the floor was mopped clean.
No sooner had everything been ready than Mom came back. I couldn’t wait to show what I had done for her. A big smile with both surprise and satisfaction spread on Mom’s face when she found the hearty dinner and the tidy room. At that moment, pride rose from the bottom of my heart.
Although I felt a little tired, everything was worthwhile.
【解析】这是一篇看图类作文。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：
一、通篇要以一般过去时为主。
二、根据图片内容提炼要点。可以使用恰当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自热。
三、注意语气。
这篇文章的写作难点放在第二条上：
看图提炼内容包括：
1.想起了今天是三八妇女节，去超市买做饭的食材；
2.在家里打扫卫生、做饭；
3.妈妈下班后领妈妈坐在餐桌前吃饭。
可以采用简单句和复合句结合的方法，内容要丰满。
【范文亮点】
范文采取了（It was the first time that……）第一次做……(Not knowing……)( I couldn’t wait to show……) 我忍不住展示……（I went to the supermarket, where I bought plenty of vegetables,）等句式。
文章采用了As soon as、pride rose from the bottom of my heart. Keeping what I had learned in mind,等高级短语为文章增色添彩。