【题目】假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英语写一篇日记,记述你周日在小区里扫雪的过程。

注意:1. 日记的开头已经为你写好;
2. 词数不少于60。
Sunday, January 12 Snowy
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在线课程【答案】Sunday, January 12 Snowy
This morning, when I looked out of the window, I excitedly found it was snowing heavily. Attracted by the beautiful sight, I decided to go out to take some photos. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldn’t wait to go outside with my camera. As I walked on the path in front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground. It was at that moment that I realized what I should do. Immediately, I ran back home to get a broom and started to sweep the path. I worked so hard that I sweated a lot. An hour later, the thick snow was cleared away. Looking at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up.
I felt very happy that I did something for my neighborhood.
【解析】本文是一篇日记,要求描述你周日在小区里扫雪的过程。
第一要注意日记的格式,第二要注意人称用第一人称,时态要用一般过去时,此外注意仔细观察图片,按图片的顺序进行描述。
关键词有:snow,take some photos,a boy slip,started to sweep the path
【亮点分析】本文详略得当,运用了如下高级结构:Attracted by the beautiful sight,(分词作状语);It was at that moment that I realized what I should do.(强调句);I worked so hard that I sweated a lot.(so…that…)以及Looking at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled and gave me thumbs up.(分词作状语)。