【题目】书面表达

【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概括图片内容。
2.用约120个单词谈谈父母的教育方式对孩子的影响, 内容包括:
(1)你赞同上述图片中的哪一种教育方式,为什么?
(2)你的父母平时是怎样教育你的;
(3)谈谈你对父母的教育方式对孩子的影响的认识。
【写作要求】
1.发表观点时必须提供理由或论据;
2.阐述观点、提供论据或叙述经历时,不能直接引用原文语句;
3.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
在线课程【答案】
A cleaner is used as an example by one mother to warn her child while by another mother to instruct her child to study well, which reflects different ways of parents’ education.
Personally, I definitely agree with the second mother’s way of educating her child, which is much more positive and instructive compared with the first one. In my daily life, my parents treat me like good friends and always encourage me to a good talent and a good citizen to society, which not only brings about confidence in the process of my growth but also cultivates my good virtues.
As a famous saying goes, parents are the best teachers for children, so parents’ way of educating children can’t be laid an emphasis on enough. Under the proper instructions of parents, just like the second mother, children are more likely to behave well and be a civilized person with good quality in the future. (154)
【解析】
这是一篇看图作文。看图作文首先需要描述图片上所显示的内容,描述要全面,不能简单概括。作文要求先用30字概括图片内容,再用120字写一篇作文表达自己的观点。写作内容包括三个方面:你赞同上述图片中的哪一种教育方式;你的父母平时是怎样教育你的;谈谈你对父母的教育方式对孩子的影响的认识。作文要求书写规范,不出现拼写错误和标点错误;正确使用语法知识;注意作文的连贯性,注意连接词的恰当使用;多使用高级词汇、重要句型,来提高作文的档次。