【题目】在早灾和震灾中的孩子们虽然通到了无法想象的困难，但他们仍然没有放弃学习。请简要描述这两张照片，并谈谈你的感想。文章的开头已经给出。
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在干旱的云南省的一所小学中，孩子们虽然面临饮水和饥饿的困扰，但他们还是在认真听讲。 | 一位上小学二年级的女童紧抱着自己的课本，站在震后的废墟前。 |
注意：词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Natural disasters left students in miserable life. However, they never gave up study.
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在线课程【答案】Natural disasters left students in miserable life. However, they never gave up study. As it’s shown in the two pictures, in a primary school in Yunan, students are learning attentively even though they were in serious trouble of lacking food and drinkable water. It is obvious that they want to equip themselves with knowledge. A girl stood in front of ruins after the earthquake, holding her books firmly in hand. There is no doubt that she is thirsty for knowledge.
The students in the two photos deserve our admiration. Though experiencing disasters, they still have a strong desire for study. Their perseverance and striving spirit touched everyone’s heart.
The two photos also set me thinking that I should value what I have. When facing a sticky problem, I won’t give up. I will regard devotion as my goal in life, having more diligence and fewer complaints. Meanwhile, I appeal to the whole society to take actions to improve their living conditions.
【解析】这是一篇看图说话。考生首先要简要描述两张照片的内容，体会两张照片体现的含义。其次，根据照片内容写出要点主题句，然后展开细节描述。注意时态，第一幅照片应用现在时态，第二幅照片应用过去时态。介绍自己的感想应用现在时态。
【亮点分析】所给范文内容齐全，句子流畅，要点明确，条理清楚，长短句结合。适当运用一些较好的词汇或句式：1. It is obvious that… 2. There is no doubt that… 3. 非谓语动词holding her books firmly in hand 4. appeal to