【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Jeff Van Gundy, head coach of the Houston Rockets, have a dream. He wants Yao Ming to be like other players, that are “selfish” and want the ball all time. Besides, Yao is a selfless person. The reason is that he has been brought up and train in this way. When he first arrive in America, Yao was an instant hit among basketball fans nationwide. They all loved this kind giant.
Gundy wants Yao to be aggressive and, if necessary, to be rude for his teammates. At first, Yao didn't really understand that what the coach wanted, but now she understands. Gundy said, “He has to be a little polite and rude”.
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【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述的是姚明初到美国不明白教练的意图。但是后来他理解了教练的意思。在美国打篮球必须有点不礼貌和粗鲁。
1.考查主谓一致。Jeff Van Gundy是句子主语,一般现在时态,谓语动词用单数第三人称形式,故把have改成has。
2.考查定语从句。句意:他想让姚明想其他运动员一样自私,总想着篮球。该句中players是先行词,指物,后面的定语从句缺少主语和引导词,故把that改成which。
3.考查固定词组。all the time一直,总是,故在all后加the。
4.考查副词。该句中的selfless和上文中的selfish是相反的意思,所以此处表示转折,故把Besides改成However。
5.考查被动语态。句意:理由是他用这种方法被养育和训练。句子用现在完成时态的被动语态,故把train改成trained。
6.考查时态。句意:当他第一次到美国时---。句子用一般过去时态,故把arrive改成arrived。
7.考查固定搭配。be rude to sb.对某人粗鲁,故把for改成to。
8.考查宾语从句。句意:姚明真地不太明白教练想要什么,但是现在他明白了。句中understand后面的宾语从句的引导词既其引导作用又要做从句的宾语,用what引导,故把that去掉。
9.考查人称代词。句意:姚明真地不太明白教练想要什么,但是现在他明白了。故把she改成he。
10.考查形容词。句意:他必须有点不礼貌和粗鲁。故把polite改成impolite。