【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10处，多者（从第 11处起）不计分。
Last year, a girl got herself stick in the sewer (下水道) and almost lost his life. Thanks the police, she was rescued in time. This accident were caused by the girl’s carelessness while walking. She fixed so much attention on her mobile phone that she didn’t notice the sewer in the front of her was without a cover.
It sounds kind of ridiculous, but it’s truly and common in our daily life. Mobile life has distracted (分散) people’s attentions from face-to-face communication. It seems what they can’t live without a mobile phone. Whether waiting for the bus or meet with friends, they will make sure that their mobile phone is at hand.
Don’t let mobile phones control your life, and you may lose yourself someday.
在线课程【答案】1. ... got herself stick ... stick → stuck
2. ...lost his life... his→ her
3. ...Thanks the police ... Thanks 后加 to
4. ...were caused by were → was
5. ... in the front of her 去掉the
6. ... it’s truly ... truly→ true
7. ... people’s attentions ... attentions → attention
8.... It seems what ... what → that
9. ... or meet with friends meet → meeting
10. ... and you may... and→ or
【解析】文章大意：一个女孩看手机差点儿失去生命，由此作者呼吁我们不要让手机控制了我们的生活。
第一处：非谓语动词用法错误。宾语herself与宾补stick之间位被动关系，故用过去分词作宾语补足语。句意：去年，一个女孩困在下水道里。故将stick改为stuck。
第二处：代词用法错误。句中主语为a girl，故对应的代词用her。句意：差点儿失去市民。故将his改为her。
第三处：短语用法错误。根据上下文及句意可知，这里应该用thanks to多亏了。句意：多亏了警察，她及时被救。故在thanks后加to。
第四处：主谓一致用法错误。句中主语his accident为单数，故谓语动词也要用单数形式。句意：这次事故是由于女孩走路时的粗心大意造成的。故将were改为was。
第五处：短语用法错误。根据上下文及句意可知，这里表达的是“前面”而非“前部”，故用in front of。句意：她没有注意到她面前的下水道没有盖子。故将the去掉。
第六处：词性用法错误。根据前面的be动词is和后面的并列形容词common可知，这里应该用形容词形式。句意：但这在我们的日常生活中是真实和普遍的。故将truly改为true。
第七处：名词数用法错误。名词attention为不可数名词。句意：移动生活分散了人们对面对面交流的注意力。故将attentions改为attention。
第八处：名词性从句关系词用法错误。根据句中从句为陈述句，故用关系词that。句意：似乎没有手机他们就无法生存。故将what改为that。
第九处：非谓语动词用法错误。根据前面的waiting河后面的逻辑主语可知，这里用现在分词作状语。句意：不管是等公共汽车还是和朋友见面。故将meet改为meeting。
第十处：连词用法错误。根据上下文及语境可知，这里用or，表示“否则”。句意：不要让手机控制你的生活，否则你总有一天会失去自我。故将and改为or。