删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Dr. Health

I am very overweight. Since people often laugh to me behind my back when I ride the underground or going for a walk, I am embarrassing and do not like going out any more. Certainly, I do not feel comfortably going to the gym to work out. Instead, I prefer to exercise at home, and it seemed that I am always going on a diet. But, no matter what I do, my efforts to lose weight always end in failure.

As a matter of the fact, my friends say that I am an attractive girl just the way I am, and that I should not worry at all about my waist or my figures. However, I do worry that my weight might damage my health. I’m not sure whether I should take weight-loss pills. There are news about a Canadian actress which suffered liver failure because of taking those pills.

What do you think I should do?

Best wishes

Guo XiLin

【答案】

【解析】1.to改为at

考查固定搭配。Laugh at sb,为固定搭配，意为“嘲笑某人”，因此把to 改为at.

2.going改为go

考查并列谓语，句意：因为当我坐地铁或出去散步时，人们常常在背后笑话我。故本句由or连接两个谓语动词ride和go，因此要把going 改为go。

3.embarsssing改为embarssed

考查形容词作表语。句意：我很难看，不想再出去了。Embarassing，为“令人尴尬的”，一般修饰物的，而面embarassed，为“尴尬的，感到尴尬的”，一般修饰人的。因此要把.embarsssing改为embarssed

4.comfotably 改为comfortable

考查形容词作表语。分析句子可知comfortably 作系动词feel的表语，作表语要用形容词，故要把.comfortably 改为comfortable。

5.seemed 改为seems

考查谓语动词的时态。根据整个文章的时态可知，要用一般现在时，所以seemed要改为seems。

6.But改为However

考查连词用法。句意：然而，不管我怎么做，我减肥的努力总是以失败而告终的。分析句意可知是“然而”，而不是“但是”，故把But改为However.

7去掉.the

考查固定搭配。as a matter of fact，为固定搭配，意思是“事实上，实际上”，因此要去掉“the”。

8. figures 改为figure

考查名词单复数。句意：事实上，我的朋友们说我是一个迷人的女孩，我就是我，我不应该担心我的腰围和身材。分析句意可知，指我自己的的身材（figure），所以要用单数，不能用复数。故把figures 改为figure

9. are改为is

考查主谓一致。分析句子可知，news 是不可数名词，故要用there is ，因此要把are改为is。

10.which改为who

考查非限制性定语从句。句意：有消息说一位加拿大女演员因为服用了这些药丸而肝衰竭。分析句子可知，本句中的女演员（actress）后被一个定语从句修饰，而actress在从句中作主语，指人要用who，而不能用which 。故把which改为who。