假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The other day, my parents and I drive to the country to have a picnic. It was the first time that

we were driven by ourselves. We felt very excited and everything went smoothly. We had a great time. Besides, on our way back home, it began to rain. We felt a little frightened because that we were not familiar driving in the rain. What’s worse, it was getting dark. We were getting desperate when the man and his wife volunteered to lead the way. Followed their car, we finally got to the city safe. I don’t know them, but we will never forget the two kind stranger.

【答案】

The other day, my parents and I drive to the country to have a picnic. It was the first time that drove

we were driven by ourselves. We felt very excited and everything went smoothly.

had smooth

We had a great time. Besides, on our way back home, it began to rain. We felt a little

However

frightened because that we were not familiar∧driving in the rain. What’s worse, it was getting

with

dark. We were getting desperate when the man and his wife volunteered to lead the way.

a

Followed their car , we finally got to the city safe. I don’t know them, but we will never forget

Following safely

the two kind stranger.

strangers

【解析】

【1】第一句：drive→ drove 考查动词时态。根据时间状语the other day判断应该用一般过去时态，故把drive改为drove。

【2】第二句：were →had 考查动词时态。在固定句型：it was the first time that从句中，从句应该用过去完成时，故把were改为had。

【3】第三句：smoothly→ smooth 考查形容词。Go是系动词表示变化，后面应该跟形容词做表语，故把smoothly改为smooth。

【4】第五句：Besides →However 考查副词。根据语境判断此处是转折关系，故把Besides改为However。

【5】第六句：去掉that 考查连词。Because后面的状语从句不再需要连词that，故去掉that。

【6】第六句：familiar 后面加with 考查介词。固定短语：be familiar with 意思是“对某人或某物熟悉”，故在familiar后面加with。

【7】第八句：the →a 考查冠词。此处是第一次出现的man，故用不定冠词a。

【8】第九句：Followed →Following 考查非谓语动词。非谓语短语做状语，句子主语和动词之间是主动关系，应该用现在分词，故把Followed改为Following。

【9】第九句：safe →safely 考查副词。修饰动词应该用副词形式，故把safe改为safely。

【10】第十句： stranger→ strangers 考查名词。Two后面跟复数名词，故把stranger改为strangers。