【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a kid, the very thing that aroused my interest about New Year’s Eve was trying to stay wake until midnight. My parents didn’t force me to go to bed early. Thus, I usually fall asleep before the New Year arrived. It wasn’t until my 10th birthday when I reached the finish line and was able to cheer with the rest of the family. I woke up happily next morning. When asking if I wanted to make a New Year’s wish, I said I would try to fight less with my brother. Unfortunately, the wish was lasted only until dinnertime. The reason is that my brother and me got into an argument about whom would set the table.
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【解析】1.arise one’s interest in引起对---的兴趣,故把abut---in。
2.句意:处于醒着的状态。此处stay处于---状态,是联系动词,后面用形容词作表语,故把wake---awake。
3.句意:父母也不强迫我去早睡,然而,新年到达之前,我通常入睡。此处表示转折,故把Thus---However。
4.根据When I was a kid,可知句子用一般过去时态,故把fall---fell。
5.句意:直到我第十岁生日,我才能坚持到最后,和家人一起为新年欢呼。此句是强调句式,故把when---that。
6.句意:第二天早上我高兴地醒来。此处指过去某一天的第二天早上,所以在next前加the。
7.句意:当我被问是否我想为新年许愿时,---。句子主语和ask之间是被动关系,故用when+过去分词做时间状语。把asking---asked。
8.句意:愿望仅仅持续到晚饭时间。last持续,是不及物动词,没有被动语态,故把was去掉。
8.句意:理由是我和我的兄弟发生了一场谁摆放桌子的争论。无论主句还是从句人称代词做主语都应该用主格,故把me---I。
9. 句意:理由是我和我的兄弟发生了一场谁摆放桌子的争论。此处about后面是介词的宾语从句,从句缺少引导词,缺少主语,根据句意可知把whom---who。