【题目】假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror 周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：
1．说明你是该报的忠实读者；
2．赞赏该报优点：
①兼顾国内外新闻；
②介绍名人成功故事；
3．提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。
注意：
1．词数：100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor－in－Chief，
Congratulations on the fifth anniversary of Global Mirror!
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Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
在线课程【答案】Dear Editor－in－Chief，
Congratulations on the fifth anniversary of Global Mirror!
I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world－famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析：本文为书信形式的应用文写作。信的开头和结尾都已经给出。题目中对文章结构和部分内容做出了提示，降低了写作难度，考生可在此基础上适当添加细节。根据题目，文章的内容分为3部分，一是“介绍自己为该报的忠实读者”，二是该报的优点，三是给报刊提出建议。其中第二、三点为重点。考生添加的报刊优点和建议应当合情合理，同时原因、建议不只一个，因此一定要注意写作的逻辑性，适当运用过渡性词语，如besides，what’s more， finally等。为了提高文章的表达档次，可以注意使用较复杂的句式（如定语从句、原因状语从句、目的状语从句）。
【亮点说明】
本篇习作语言地道，覆盖了所有要点，众多的高级句式结构却被作者运用得恰到好处，如定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句、虚拟语气等。难能可贵的是，作者对写作要点拿捏得很准，最后在提建议时，适当发挥，使得建议的意义更大。it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.ｓｏ ｔｈａｔ引导的目的状语从句和定语从句完美结合；which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.ｗｈｉｃｈ引导的非限制性定语从句和宾语从句同句出现；I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning,ｓｕｇｇｅｓｔ后的宾语从句里用虚拟语气堪称经典。
