【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In recently years, many young people prefer to go shopping on the Internet. People have different opinions about online shopping. Some think online shopping was more convenient and the goods are cheap. However, others believe it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. And that is impossible to check the quality of the goods. As far as I am concerned, go shopping in a store is a better way. It is a fun to walk around stores and look different goods on sale. We can choose that we need.
Beside, we can chat with the shop assistant and know a lot of useful informations.
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【解析】在最近今年,修饰years 用形容词不用副词,所以是recent
根据前后句的时态可以知道网上购物方便是一般情况,用一般现在时即可。
根据前句网上购物更方便,网上的物品更便宜,所以前后并列,都用比较级cheaper
检查货物的质量是不可能的,此处应该用it做形式主语,to do 做真正的主语。
此句表达在商店购物是更好的方法,在商店购物作主语,所以应该用going,不用go。
此句表达在商店逛有趣,fun 不可数,所以其前不加a
此处表示在商店逛,看不同的货物,看用look at
此处表示,我们可以选我们需要的。Choose 后加宾语,从句中缺宾语,所以用what。
此句表示:此外,我们可以跟售货员聊天,交流,得知更多信息。此外用besides, 而不是beside
Information 不可数,不能用复数。