【题目】1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。
2. 是否同意他们的教育方式,并陈述理由。
3. 对家庭教育提出建议。
4. 字数:120字左右
参考词汇: 溺爱 spoil v.

As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways.
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在线课程【答案】As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. In the cartoon the father educates their child with a ruler while the mother with a bar of chocolate, which makes their child confused. The picture reflects that the father is too strict with the child and the mother spoils him.
I think neither of their education methods is right. If we always punish children severely when they make mistakes, they will become nervous and lack self-confidence or they will become violent and aggressive, following in their fathers’ footsteps. If we always spoil children, they will turn out to be selfish/self-centered and dependent.
As far as I am concerned, parents should use appropriate methods to educate their children. Since punishment and love both play important roles in children’s education, parents should try to keep a balance between them. Besides they should often communicate with their children to learn what they are thinking of. Also, they are expected to set a good example to children and guide their children properly when necessary. Only by doing so can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development.
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇看图作文,谈论的是家庭教育的问题,写作时要对漫画认真分析,深层理解,要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。写看图作文时中心要突出,前言搭后语,注意语言的逻辑性 如:but, even等词的恰当运用能起到不可小看的作用; 意单线表达,而非多头,避免思绪混乱;不要过多地喊口号,唱高调;做到先语言后观点,避免中文式英语。减少比喻,避免间接翻译。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇看图作文,文章采用三段式,内容齐全,结构布局合理,并使用高级句子。As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways.as引导非限制性定语从句;whch makes their child confused.which引导的非限制性定语从句用在句中;If we always punish children severely when they make mistakes, they will become nervous and lack self-confidence或they will become violent and aggressive, following in their fathers’ footsteps.条件句和现在分词做状语完美结合;Since punishment and love both play important roles in children’s education, parents should try to keep a balance between them.since引导原因状语从句;to learn what they are thinking of.what引导宾语从句;Only by doing so can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development.部分倒装的使用堪称经典。