【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I go on a group walking holiday in the capital of my province last year. The activity, which lasted for two days, were great, and I made much good friends. However, we were from different cities, so it would be difficulty for us to meet each other very often. On my way home, I started talking to the girl next me, who also took part in the holiday. I found I had so much in the common with her and I decided to go back together next year. This activity not only helped me improve my health, but also helped me meet different peoples. I would like to taking part in other similar activities on the future.
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【解析】这篇短文讲述的是在我参加集体散步时和一个女孩聊天,发现这项活动不仅可以锻炼身体还可以交朋友。
1.根据语境及短文时态可知,本句应该用一般过去时态,go的过去式为went。故把go改为went.
2.last持续,该句表示“持续两天”,last为及物动词,故把for省去。
3.句子主语是the activity,是名词单数,谓语用was.故把were改为was.
4. much修饰的是不可数名词,该处修饰可数名词friends,应该用many修饰。故把much改为many.
5.该处作be的表语,用形容词作表语。故把difficultly改为different.
6.next to是固定短语,译为“紧挨着”。故加上to.
7.根据句意“我发现我和她有很多共同之处,并且我们决定第二年一起回去。”可知是我们决定。故把I改为we.
8.people在句中表示人们,peoples表示人民,该句中表示不同的人。故把peoples改为people.
9.would like to do译为“愿意做某事”,是固定搭配。故把taking改为take.
10.in the future译为“今后,将来”,是固定搭配。故把on改为in.