【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Have you ever been to Wuzhen? It is such beautiful a village that I have already visited it many times. Locating in Jiaxing, Zhejiang province, it has a history of about 6,000 years. Like much small towns in the southern area, that has a lot of small bridges going over clean streams. Local people live old houses, and they are very friendly. During the day, you can walk or sitting on a boat to enjoy the natural scenery along the streams. The scene at night is attractively as well. There are many kind of round and square light. Every time I look at the pictures for which I took, I will remember the water, the bridges and the houses. I love an amazing water village!
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【解析】本文主要讲述了浙江嘉兴的乌镇以及作者去乌镇旅游的经历和感想。
第一处:考查so和such 的用法。“It is such beautiful a village ”,so+形容词/副词+(a/an)+(单数)复数可数名词/+that+从句,such+(a/an) +形容词/副词+单数可数名词。故将such 改为so。
第二处:考查固定用法。“ Locating in Jiaxing, Zhejiang province, it has a history of about 6, 000 years.”,be located in“位于”。在句中省略了be,located 在句中作状语。故将Locating改为Located。
第三处:“ Like much small towns in the southern area,”,much修饰不可数名词,many修饰可数名词。故将much改为many。
第四处:“Like much small towns in the southern area, that has a lot of small bridges going over clean streams.”,Like much small towns in the southern area是介词短语,作状语,主句要用it来代指前面提到的Wuzhen,that代指的是“那个,那”。故将that改为it。
第五处:“Local people live old houses,”,live表示“居住”是不及物动词,后面不能直接接名词,故在live后加in。
第六处:“ you can walk or sitting on a boat to enjoy the natural scenery along the streams.”,or前后的动词形式应保持一致。故将sitting 改为sit。
第七处:“ The scene at night is attractively as well.”,attractively是副词,副词不能作表语。故将attractively改为attractive。
第八处:考查名词单复数。“There are many kind of round and square light.”, many修饰可数名词复数。故将kind改为kinds。
第九处:“Every time I look at the pictures for which I took,”,which引导定语从句,修饰 the pictures,took the pictures表示“照照片”,不需要介词for。故将 for删去。
第十处:“I will remember the water, the bridges and the houses. I love an amazing water village!”,这里 amazing water village特指前文所说的乌镇,故将an改为the。