【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Teenagers often have problems with English. Yesterday we hold a discussion about what to learn English well. We came up with some suggestion. For example, some of us thought it was important to take the active part in classroom activities, because we could learn a lot of during the activities. Some agreed watching American films could a good way to improve listening and speaking skills. Others suggested read English novels to practice English.
As for me, I prefer listening careful to teachers in class. What’s more, writing to your pen pal in America helps me much with my English. I hope all of us can found our own ways to learn English well.
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【解析】本文是一篇记叙文,主要讲述了青少年对如何学好英语所提的一系列建议,大部分人都有自己的观点与看法,作者也发表了自己独特的见解。通过此文章,告诉了大家学好英语的办法,对同学们来说有一定的帮助。
1.“Yesterday we hold a discussion about what to learn English well”由yesterday可知,此处为过去时。故将hold改为 held。
2.“Yesterday we hold a discussion about what to learn English well”由句意可知这场讨论是关于如何学好英语,how如何、怎样。故将what改为how。
3.“We came up with some suggestion.”我们想出了一些建议,由some可知此处不止一个建议,从下文的举例也可以看出不止一个例子,所以建议应该为复数。故将suggestion改为suggestions。
4.“some of us thought it was important to take the active part in classroom activities”我们中的一些人认为积极参加课堂活动是重要的。此处活动没有具体到是哪一类活动,所以是泛指,不定冠词(a,an)表示泛指,定冠词(the)表示特指。故将the改为an。
5.“Some agreed watching American films could a good way to improve listening and speaking skills”一些人同意观看美国电影是一个很好的能够改善英语听说技能的方式。在从句部分中可以看出,缺少了谓语部分be。故添加be。
6.“Some agreed watching American films could a good way to improve listening and speaking skills”观看美国电影是一个很好的能够改善英语听说技巧的方式,listening在此为动词作谓语,speaking skills说话的技能为宾语,两者之间不需要出现连接词。故删去and。
7.“Others suggested read English novels to practice English.”另外一些人建议通过阅读英语小说来改善英语,suggest doing sth建议做某事。故将read改为reading。
8.“I prefer listening careful to teachers in class.”我更喜欢在课堂上仔细听老师讲课,listen词性为动词,应该用副词修饰。故将careful改为carefully。
9.“writing to your pen pal in America helps me much with my English”写信给我在美国的笔友也对我的英语有很大的帮助,作者是以第一人称描写全文。故将your改为my。
10.“I hope all of us can found our own ways to learn English well.”我希望我们都能找到学好英语的方式。can为情态动词,后边跟动词原形。故将found改为find。