【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ve been dancing since I am five. My parents, that were very strict with me, put me in many famous dance studio. I must go to dance almost every day, and only rested in Sundays. My parents wanted me learn every kind of dance so that when he owned my dance studio, I could teach other students. I loved dancing or sometimes they pushed me so hard that I hated it. Anyhow, I thanked them for pushing me and make me an excellent dancer. When I was 20 I opened my own dance studio with their help. Now I’m glad to be able to teach different people what to dance.
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【解析】1.am→was 考查时态,句意为,“我从五岁开始跳舞”,这里是对过去的说明,因此用一般过去时,故将am改为was.
2.that→who 考查定语从句,这里的先行词是parents,为非限定性定语从句,所以关系代词用who,故将that改为who.
3.studio→studios 考查单复数,根据前面的“many”可知,这里“dance studio”不止一个,故需要用复数,故将studio改为studios.
4.in→on 考查介词,句意为“只在星期天休息”,具体到某一天,前面的介词用on,故将in改为on.
5.︿to 考查不定式,“想要某人干某事”,want sb to do sth,故将learn改为 to learn.
6.he→I 考查人称一致 ,结合语境可知,句意为“当我有了自己的舞蹈室,我就可以教其他的学生”。故将he改为I.
7.or→but 考查连词,结合语境,句意为,“我热爱舞蹈,但是有时候他们逼我太紧了,以至于我讨厌跳舞”。这里是前后转折,故将or改为but.
8.make→making 考查介宾搭配。Thank sb for doing sth,感谢某人干某事,故将make改为making.
9.a→my 考查固定搭配。句意为,“在他们的帮助下,我开了自己的舞蹈室”。“我自己的”,为“my own”,故将a改为my.
10.what→how 考查关系代词。句意为,“现在我很高兴能教不同的人如何跳舞”。表示方式的关系代词为how,故将what改为how.