【题目】请阅读下面图文信息,并按照要求用英语写一篇120词左右的文章。
CCTV曾播出过这则公益广告:一位母亲每天晚上下班以后先给婆婆洗脚,然后……

【写作内容】
1.简要描述图文中的内容:
2.分析父母的言行对孩子产生的影响;
3.联系实际,谈谈你该如何回报父母?
【写作要求】
1.文章开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
【参考词汇】
1.婆婆mother-in-law n.
2.盆basin n.
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
CCTV has broadcasted such a public service advertisement.
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在线课程【答案】CCTV has broadcasted such a public service advertisement.A mother washes her mother-in-law’s feet every night after work.Then,she does the same for her son.On a Mother’s day,the son holds a basin of water with both hands for his mother who is very tired after work,saying,“Mum,let me help you wash your feet!”
After seeing the PSA I am moved by the little boy who shows his love and devotion to his mother.It is his mother who sets a good example for him.It is obvious that parents have a deep influence on their children.
As for me,I will try my best to be a good daughter/son.At home,I can help them do the housework.While at school,I will be an excellent student.In a word,I will live up to my parents’ expectations.(115 words)
【解析】这是一篇图画类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1. 图片介绍用过去时或一般现在时。2. 要点要齐全。分析父母的言行对孩子产生的影响是重点,图片可以简要描述。可以适当的加一些变化,使用连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。3. 先介绍联系图画内容,突出从母亲给婆婆洗脚到儿子给妈妈洗脚的过程,再联系生活实际根据要求自由发挥。
【范文亮点】
1. 范文采取了定语从句(the son holds a basin of water with both hands for his mother who is very tired after work);时间状语从句(While at school,I will be an excellent student.)等句式。
2. 文章采用了devotion;a basin of;try one’s best to等高级单词或短语。