假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3.请在答题卡上做答。

When I was 12 years old, I went for my father to his workplace—a car showroom. I was wandering around when I see a poor woman with a child on her lap sit outside the showroom. When I saw that she was crying, I went outside and told my father. He went out, offered her some water and then asked her how was wrong. The woman said that her husband had been died some months before and that she didn’t have anyone else in her family could help her. Her children had been sick for the past three days so she was unable to go to work. Now she didn’t have a grain of food to eat. My father and I were deep shocked by her story. Then he took them to a nearest hospital for her child to be treated.

【答案】

【1】for→with

【2】see→saw

【3】sit→sitting

【4】outside→inside

【5】how→what

【6】去掉been

【7】加who/that

【8】children→child

【9】deep→deeply

【10】a→the

【解析】

试题分析：一个贫穷的女人带着孩子在我爸爸的店外游荡，我和爸爸因她的故事而同情她，并且带她的孩子去最近的医院进行治疗。

【1】for→with 考查介词。 根据短文可知是我和爸爸一起去，表示和谁.....，所以用with。

【2】see→saw 考查动词。全文使用的是过去时 ，所以用saw。

【3】sit→sitting 考查动词。see sb doing sth看见某人正在做某事，故用sitting。

【4】outside→inside考查副词。根据He went out，可知爸爸是从店里走出来，那么之前我是跑进了店里告诉爸爸，故用inside

【5】how→what考查关系词。宾语从句，what在从句中做主语，用 what。

【6】去掉been 考查动词。die是不及物动词，没有被动语态，故去掉been。

【7】加who/that 考查关系词。 定语从句先行词是anyone else，加who/that。

【8】children→child 考查名词。根据a poor woman with a child可知这个女人只有一个孩子，所以用child。

【9】deep→deeply 考查副词。修饰动词shocked用副词，用deeply。

【10】a→the考查冠词。形容词最高级前用定冠词the表示特指，用the。