【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有2处.涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:此行缺一个词在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 。
It is interested to look at differences between schools in different countries. In many European countries which the relationship between teachers and students is quite formal, discipline and respect for the teacher is considered as very important. In northern European countries, however, the relationship between teachers and students are more relaxed and much friendly. In America, for example, the relationships are quite formal and the same is true of Britain. Other important difference is whether schools are state schools and private schools. State schools are paid by the government while in private schools, the education of the children is paid for by his parents.
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【解析】interested→interesting 考查形容词,interesting修饰事和物,interested修饰人,这里形式主语it代替的是事,故将interested改为Interesting.
which→where;which→in which 考查关系代词,这里的先行词是“countries”,后面的定语从句缺少的是地点状语,因此关系代词需要用where,或者用 in which.
is→are 考查系动词,前面的主要是“discipline”和“respect”两个部分,因此后面的系动词不能用第三人称单数,故将is改为are.
are→is 考查系动词,这里的主语是relationship,为不可数名词,因此后面的系动词要用第三人称单数形式,故将are改为is.
friendly→friendlier 考查比较级,这里的relaxed和friendly为并列成分,前面的relaxed用了比较级,后面的friendly也需要使用比较级,故将friendly改为friendlier.
formal→informal 考查形容词,根据文章内容可知,这里是对不同国家的师生关系进行对比,在欧洲国家,师生关系是很“formal”的,根据所给词汇可知,这里的意思为,美国的师生关系不那么正式,比较随意。故将formal改为informal.
other→another 考查形容词,other泛指其它的,another是在原有基础上,另一个,这里的句意为,“另一个不同在于学校是公立还是私立”。这里是在原有基础上,再进行比较,而非泛指,故将other改为another.
and→or 考查连词,在表示选择时,and表示“两者都...”,而or表示“两者之间选择一个”,这里的学校要么是“私立”要么是“公立”,故将and改为or.
︿for 考查动词短语,动词短语在改为被动语态时,需要保持动词短语的完整性。将句子还原为主动语态为,“the government pays for the state schools”,因此在被动语态中,缺少介词for,故将paid改为paid for.
his→their 考查物主代词,前面的“the education of the children”,children为复数,因此后面parents需要用their修饰,故将his改为their.