【题目】假如你是李华，下图描述的是你这个周六的活动，请你就此写一篇英语日记。
要求：1. 包括所有的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2. 字数：120词左右。
Morning: cycle to raise money for disaster – hit areas | Afternoon: watch the film of Jiao Yulu |
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Evening: read The Diary of a Young GirlDecember 27th Saturday Sunny
What a wonderful weekend！
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在线课程【答案】December 27th Saturday Sunny
What a wonderful weekend！
Today is Saturday. My friends Li Ming and I joined a team of cyclists along our city with the hope of raising money to help children in disaster-hit areas. Although tired, we were having a good time and collected about 5 thousand Yuan to give to the schools. In the afternoon, we went to see a film named Jiao Yulu. I was so moved by the hero in the film that I made up my mind to study harder in order to serve for the people better in the future. As usual, I spent about two hours reading The Diary of a Young Girl. The experience of the character attracted me much. “What a wonderful weekend!” I thought when I went to bed at 10 o’clock.
【解析】1.确定文章的体裁，本题所要求写的书面表达是日记，那么首先就需要知晓日记的写作特点。
2.确定文章时态的基调，确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否。这篇日记介绍当天发生过的事，应该以一般过去时为主。
3.仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示，领会要写的文章的主题，确定文章的段落，写出各段的主题句。本题应该按照时间顺序Morning: cycle to raise money for disaster – hit areas；Afternoon: watch the film of Jiao Yulu；Evening: read The Diary of a Young Girl。这样确定文章的基本结构。
4.尝试用高级词汇，使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构，也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。如：As usual，I spent about two hours reading The Diary of a Young Girl.
长难句解析：
Although tired, we were having a good time and collected about 5 thousand Yuan to give to the schools.
although引导让步状语从句，此处是一个省略的从句，完整的从句应该是Although we were tired.主句由and连接were having和collected两个谓语。